COLD EMAIL + CV REVIEW

The free CV advice you've been Googling tells you nothing about how this actually works. Senior analysts at Macquarie, Goldman, MBB and the top-tier law firms read your cold email in 4 seconds on a phone preview, then your CV in 90 seconds on the train. If both don't clear those windows, you don't get the chat.

This is a 1:1 review. Not a template, not an AI rewrite, not a 40-page guide. You send the draft, I send it back marked up the way a recruiter or analyst would actually read it.

WHAT YOU GET

A custom review document with five sections, returned within 24 hours:

01. INPUTS SNAPSHOT. Your target firm, role, send window, and a read on where the email and CV sit before the rewrite.

02. COLD EMAIL, MARKED UP. Line-by-line teardown of your draft. Red for kills, amber for tweaks. Specific fixes, not "be more concise".

03. COLD EMAIL, REWRITE. Fixed version, copy-paste ready. Subject line, send time, ask framing, signature.

04. CV, MARKED UP. Bullet-by-bullet with red and amber flags. Action / metric / outcome rewrites for the bullets that need them, and the ones to cut.

05. TOP 3 FIXES AND NEXT SENDS. The three changes that get you 80% of the lift, plus a 3-send sequence with timing and subjects.

WHAT YOU NEED TO PROVIDE

Send at checkout (or to the intake email I send straight after order):

• Your cold email draft (paste in or .docx)
• Your CV (PDF or .docx)
• Target firm + role + named contact (if known)
• Send deadline (if any)

TURNAROUND

Returned as a PDF review document within 24 hours of receiving all inputs. 7am to 9pm AEST workdays. Orders placed overnight return end-of-day next business day.

WHO THIS IS FOR

Students and early-career professionals about to send a cold email that matters, to a Senior Analyst, an MBB partner, a Magic Circle partner, a recruiter. Or anyone whose CV bullets read like a job description, not a record of what they did.

WHO THIS IS NOT FOR

If you haven't drafted anything yet, write the email first. This service reviews, it doesn't ghost-write from scratch.

LICENCE

Single-user licence. For your own preparation. Do not redistribute, resell, or post in shared drives, Discord servers, or Notion pages.